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What do you think about my poem?
It is incomplete I wish to know what imagery it convey so I know if it conveys what I see in my head.
Wings beat against glass Vainly struggling an envious grip, Delicately tearing Between spiteful fingertips.
This seraphic beauty is in the devil’s grasp
Feathers cascade In descending red cataracts, So handsomely frayed Amongst the seams of the act.
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Again, incomplete It is about the r@pe of an angel Don’t ask The phrase wings against glass inspired me to write, then the image came to mind, I managed to mold and re-write it to what it is now I’ve reached a bit of a block(hopefully it will soon end once I finally complete this). Perhaps a few opinions may help.
yes like I stated, it’s incomplete hoping for constructive criticism I need some kind of dawning of inspiration
thank you for your kind words ^_^
this poem is great. like I can see what your sayin except for the last line you kinda lost me. your really good.
bah, they changed the title on me I’m asking for criticism and opinions please
and thank you those who commented above
I like it. This is of course the way I see this poem, but that’s what I like about poetry, that it can be read and understood in different ways.
It’s dark. And fragile. And I like that.
Nice :-)
Its good. keep at it.
You might tell more about the emotions they are haveing or sensations maybe contrasting carictoristics could try a simile might also try to show the change of evens does one corrupt the other or change the others ways? good poem so far has potential, keep up the good work.
Made me think of this image.
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