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What can I do to improve my Media Film story?

Im making a film trailer in media and I need peoples opinions on my film story or what I should do to it

My story plan is about a girl who you dont see in the film because the camra is her and you only see her in pictures and in the mirror.She is the narrator through the story and the viewer gets to understand her as she is going through her normal life.viewes see her and by the end clues come about and by the end viewers learn she was autistic and hade been taking what people hade said to her litrally which made her starve herself to death when viewers finaly see who she really was and how she was seen.

What do you think,Whats your Opinion ?

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Answer #1

It sounds great If I were you, the ending would be like.. her dropping the camera in front of her mirror (she’d probably in her room..) and you see her hand drop in the mirror. A door opens and you can see her mom’s lower body (neck down), running in and screaming.

Haha it’s up to you. Sounds like it’ll be interesting.

Answer #2

When I first read it, it seemed a little complicated but now reading it through again, I think it will be really awsome. I could just imagine in my head what it looked like. I totally think you’ve got a winner with this. Have fun and I bet its ganna be awsome!

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