Okay so this is mine and my friends first experience in any filming or editing or anything of that sort. I filmed, edited and directed it whilst my friend acted and helped with the editing. What help can you give us to improve it?
Hm, I think some uses of panning and moving shots could be used to add some dynamic to the video like when she was combing her hair or some similar shots. But other than that, I think this was very well done Stefie. It reminds me of those Dove videos, the way this was edited (well it may not be the Dove videos I'm thinking of).
Only thing I can comment on is the camera shaking from time to time but it's so slight it's not worth doing anything about.
It's great. Well done :)
This is the video