The Inspiration

Hey can yall me tell what yall think of dis poem I wrote

“evry time I c you I feel da pain liftin I know that my love 4 you was Heaven sendin a message that we was meant 4 each other women I rather be wit then u your da vision that I c when I hear love your the embodiment of evry thing heaven has 2 offer above God is da true artist 2 create such a masterpiece I dont even need heaven because when im wit you I already found peace” so what yall think

Answer #1

awww… I truly love it!! it speaks out what love is… it’s simple, short, and say its message!! and like cyberchick has said, you are a true artist!! you should like give my boyfriend tips to write poems like that… like your poem “eternal love”…wow!! =)

Answer #2

It’s pretty good, exept you really shouldn’t write poetry with all those abreviations and numbers.

Answer #3

ooh I kinda left out a line ah well

Answer #4

ah its great! your a true artist!

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