I was inspired to write this right now..what do you guys think of it?

Awe, ty! how sweet…:) not my best work…I must admit…under 15 mins…just drafted it once and typed on here…:)

glad you liked it.

that happened to me yesterday :D well the end did, well… it was my uncle i had to grab by the lake before he fell in : l i let him fall lol

but really good poem/writing, i love when people use there real emotion in them, it shows they have guts and arent afraid of how they feel. like how i wasnt afraid to let my uncle fall in the lake :D lmao

LOL..thanks…like i said wasnt my best…in under 15 mins…but i was inspired…my thoughts wondered and then i just started writing and that is what came out! :)

Glad you liked it!

very nice, makes me think about lost love, and my ex whom i still love.

that is whom its about…an ex love…:( wow, you totally got it to the dot…well done!

Very good :) Makes me think about my ex :/ But I still love it lol

thanks…I guess we all have that in common…our ex’s…the way we feel about some of them…

I am glad you liked it..:)

Like I’ve said before, I love reading anything you write. :)

Awe, thank you sweetie…that means so much to hear you say that…i guess i just speak from the heart…real feelings, real emotions…just how I am…

I am so glad you liked it! hugs♥

LOVE IT u got more? i a wanna read MORE

Amazing, for 2 reasons.

1. You made it under 15 minutes…

2. You got a lot of emotions into it in under 15 minutes.

I dunno about you but the only person that I knew that could do something like that is Jesus…

Aww… :) That was great!♥ I can tell it was from the heart… :) Good job! Muah!♥ xoxo

thanks so much…i have many just they usually go to status :(

thnx so much hermanito…its not my best work as you already know…but like i said i was inspired by so many thoughts of him & it just came pouring out…:)

you know me too well angel…it really was as all of my work is…thank you so much for the kind words! many hugs…♥(muah)