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What do you think of my poem?
A Heart’s Lament
At one point in life, you had me at hello You were the happiness in my life But then all you caused was pain All you made me feel was lament All you did was me ask myself “Why?” and “How?” Why did I meet you? How could I have fallen for you? I loved you and wanted you I couldn’t live without you But now you choose to live without me But I don’t care Now I’m really happy Once . . . a long time ago You had me on my knees But now that I’ve changed I will never crawl for you You had your chance at a happy life with me But now you’re with someone else And threw that all away
Wow, you could become a really good poet. :] Really nice. <33.
that fantastic… you could so plaay aound with that.. like put it into a thrid person.. or a song.. that FANTASTIC!!! your a natural!!!
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that was simply awesome that was great
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