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hero time bomb I leave my home and the ones I love, To protect them and their home, I must hide my sorrow and show only pride, In my strong confident stride.

I’m a turtle always shielding my self, People see a hero in me, But inside I’m exhausted and scared, And I don’t think it can be repaired.

I’m as sneaky as a walking stick, Creeping by looking completely fine, No one can see what I hide, This deadly time bomb on the inside.

I’m like a wolf crying for the moon, But instead I cry for you, And the safe home life I miss, Hoping ill get to give another kiss.

I’m sorry I’m not there for you, I’m sad that I left, But I have to do my duty, To protect my countries beauty.

And if I don’t see you again, I’m sorry for this bomb inside my heart, If I die please know only this, I did it for you and only you I will miss.