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The darkness is overwhelming
And getting deeper every second
The depression grows
It’s fed like air to a wildfire
And spreads with each breath
Empty and alone
The despair is well known
I’m slipping away
Will you reach out and save me?
Or will you let me fall?
You ask what I’m thinking
And how I feel
I wish I could answer these simple questions
I’m drowning in confusion
My world has changed
I feel empty and alone
I know you say you’re there
But are you?
I’ve never trusted a single soul
Unable to let go
Afraid to get close I’m an empty shell Avoiding all deep emotions Just skimming the surface Am I really all that cold? Beautifully broken And all alone I wish I could let go
that's really beautiful. I love how it doesn't rhyme consistently.
It's brilliant :)