How is this poem??

ok I wrote a poem for my ex boyfriend here it is…

I’ll start by saying I love you You’ll always be in my heart I hope you never forget about us and what we had

Nothing comes close to what we had You’ll never find a girl that loves you more than me You’ll always be my baby because there’s no moving on for me

My love for you will never end because I no your the one I never met a man like you You kept me in line, you talked to me when times got rough

There’s nobody to take your place I miss you baby I need you in my life I never knew I could hurt this much

I was dum I was wrong I let you down Nobody gets me like you do I no how I feel about you now

It’s driving me crazy that I can’t be with you I don’t need anybody but you I wont ever love anybody as much as I love you

If I was with you face to face I wouldn’t let you go I made mistakes in the past and so did you But I love you so much lets start new

   I LOVE YOU BABY!!!

ok thats my poem is there anything I should change or add??? anything you can thing of that will make it better PLEASE help me out

Answer #1

aw thats a poem I can relate to! its great! keep writing :) also try writing some poems like this that ryhme because when ther’s ryhming,ther’s a good ‘flow’ in the poem you no what I mean? but anywys great job!

Answer #2

thats a good poem. thers really nothing you can change about it. its perfect and exactly how I feel about my ex rite now.

Answer #3

ahhhw; that’s soo cutte. I wiish I could make something up liike that.

I think you should keep it the way it is.

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