Name for this 'poem'?

She stands infront of the mirror Dressed in red Touched by her emotions With a bottle in hand the alcohol starts to talk Admits all that she’s denied Shows all she had to hide.

Today shes dead maybe tomorrow she’ll be alive Writing notes she could never send Thinking of what she could never say… What to do with all the love she had to give for him? Pick it up, throw it to the ground Put it together and tear it down.

Consumed in what she beleived what love and honesty Now drowning in what are really lies and deceit, Her heart was left only to bleed.

His breath made her tremble His steps made her fall His words confused her His love now horrifies her.

Thanks for reading.. If it sounds like sh!t its Okay, feel free to talk down on it.

:)

Belle

Answer #1

Loves Reflection And the bottle speaks… Bleeding love Fooled Once Again Left Alone With Her Bottle.

lol.. I don’t know. I suck at this.

Answer #2

she holds the answer to her heart only if it wouldnt be so dark she should run, run so far away or try to fight him the other way find a white knight she must for he will surely make him bust

solves the answer :P:P

Answer #3

ooo great stuff… but why does his love horrify her? O_O stalker? I enjoyed reading it, so ill give ya 9/10 ah hell 10/10

Answer #4

haha thank you informer 220! that was cool.

Answer #5

it horrifies her bc shes scared that he will hurt her again. :)

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