My poem! A serious one!

At first I believed you You said everything would be okay At first I believed you Now I don’t. Okay? Your jealous mean lies Those sick twisted lies Your jealous mean lies Stab me in the heart I will never fall for you again I hate all you men I will never fall for you again Get away from me

Answer #1

I agree with yur poem 100% !

Answer #2

umm…not tring 2 b mean or anything but I have heard better…

Answer #3

Hmm. It has a nice ring to it. It was really… Indescribable. :o It was pretty… Original. Haha good job.

Answer #4

Intense but pretty good

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