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She watches her shadow as she walks Her hair responding to the wind And momentum Shoulders square Sun siphoning enthusiasm From behind
I gesture at the scattered sky For the sake of white-tipped gloves And wish the arrow-winged birds Would never vacate our field.
Please tell me what you think !
By: shannon ( something) Please dont steal it im very proud of what I write and I wouldnt steal another poets work do dont steal mine out of respect for wirters and writeing
your poem is awesome! So beutiful! I think you should call it "Her Shadow" ! _ Hope I helped!
I love it, it's fantastic, I'm a lyricist so I have a certain appreciation for talent, and that is exactly what you have.
this poem is really good its unique, one of a kind, I love it... I would call it... shadowed beauty. :) hope I helped.
yeah I love it and yeah Shadowed Beauty would be great!