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We're doing original declerations of independence. Does this sentence have any run-ons or fragments? It is my preamble.
I, (My name here), am declaring myself independent of American History because of its boring properties and information I will never use; as a human being with personal rights and ideas, I am entitled to do so.
This is a better way. You semi colon is unneeded between use/as and the sentence is therefore a comma splice. I fixed it for you by removing it and placing rearranging the subject.
I (My name here), am declaring myself independent of American History because of its boring properties and information I will never use. I am entitled to do so as a human being with personal rights and ideas,
This is what my mom said it should be. She is very smart in grammar.
It should be:
I,(your name here), am declaring myself independent of American History because of its' boring properties and information. I believe I will never use the properties and information; therefore, as a human with personal rights and ideas, I am entitled to do so.
To me it sorta is. If I were you , I'd put: I, (My name here), am declaring myself independent of American History because of its boring properties and information I will never use. As a human being with personal rights and ideas, I am entitled to do so.
Ya, I was going to do that, but Thomas Jefferson had a one sentence preamble, and I thought it would be cool to do that. Any ideas on how I could change it?
Ok, I give up on making it a one sentence preamble. Thanks for the sentence, I'll use that.
well it is a compound sentence I just had a test on this got a 93
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