Where are any commas in this sentence?

I’m working on a story. This is the first sentence.

I glance at her picture as the cold black rose petals glide their way across the lifeless grass.

What’s a better word for glide??

Answer #1

Other words for glide: slither, slide along, slide, sashay, slip, skate, float fly, soar, wheel, drift, coast, hover, float.

Hope this helps. -Kick

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