What you think of these unfinished songs

Well,first I wanna know what you think of these unfinished songs I have written so far.please tell me the whole truth,the honest truth and nothing but the truth:

Time: Time passed me by,couldnt understand,why it cant stopjust take a rest,cause I dont know why,time passed me by. Time never stops,I wish it would,itd be so great,not something to hate,remeber,time can fly,just like when,time passes by. Time is so fragile,not something to mess with,so if you get the chance,dont go back,whether it be for romance,or if you did someone wrong,just give yourself another chance. What did you think???(remeber,be honest :)) Unnamed: Peeplecan be,such a drag,youre sitting there waiting,they`re wasting time,theres not much time left,time can fly real fast,,trust me I know this info,and its hard to beleive it flies like that,its hard to conceive the world like that,peeple are just crazy sometimes. Whatd you think???/be hanest Untitled I kknow its been a rough one,but ill get through,please help me god,I just,dont know what to do,lie was great,until this happened,what triggered it I do not know,but,I know its been a tough one,but ill get through,please help me god,to get through,at this point in time,I dont think I can.at least,not alone. Whatd you think???be honest Do they need work??? P.s im trying to write a new song but dont know what to write about…any ideas?