How should I arange this sentence?

Ok so fanely the time has come and I’m 14 and ma dad is going to allow me to get ma tatto.

And I don’t know what sounds better

Like this?

Manuel Cerventes J.r Forever

Or

Manuel Cervantes J.r My Brother Forever

The tatto is my brother. Wich one do you think will it look better?

Answer #1

I like forever my brother, not my brother forever.

Answer #2

at 14 its illegal to get a tattoo you must be 18 or 16 with parental consent in some places (which in my opinion is stupid becase 16 year olds are too young) no profesional can tattoo a 14 year old kid, even with parental consent personally I like the second wording but you cant get a tattoo legally now wait a few years, think more about what you want, and then get it when you 18

Answer #3

Manual Cervantes Jr. My Brother Forever or Forever My Brother

Answer #4

the second one you don’t wont someone to think he’s your boy friend.

Answer #5

Definetly the second one. I like it a lot better and it sounds better.

Answer #6

to be honest I would not like any of them can I ask why your getting your brother tatoo on you for

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