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How can I start the first paragraph of a soppy love story???

Im in gr 8 and in boarding school and we have to make up a love storie for out matrics ball dance so please if any ones good at writting please give me some help

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The scenery was fetching. Sun glittered waves danced and rolled their way into the distant horizon, disappearing in the dark shadow of the mountains that stretched far along the western shore. That’s not what had captured her attention, though. She had spent most of her childhood on this very beach, daydreaming of the prince who would one day come and sweep her off her feet. The man who stood in the distance, angrily throwing stones into the ocean was not quite the man she had pictured. He was taller, and his hair fell about his shoulders in dark locks, as opposed to the ashen waves of her fantasy paramour, but somehow she was drawn to him. His current impassioned disposition fed her desire - she had to meet him.

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