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Can someone add some lines to this 2 poems I started??

1st poem:

You made me cry, you told me lies, But I can’t stand to say goodbye

2nd poem:

Times have changed and times are strange, here I come but I ain’t the same… Time’s gone by, it seems to be… You could have been a better friend to me…

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Answer #1

1st poem: You made me cry, you told me lies, But I can’t stand to say goodbye Though the more I stay, the longer the pain, will stain myself

2nd poem; Times have changed and times are strange, here I come but I ain’t the same… Time’s gone by, it seems to be… We’re growing apart, just you and me.. I would like to stay and be your friend, but would that really work out in the end? Just come and tell me, don’t be shy… for I could never ever live a lie.

Please tell me what you think!!! =) thanx

Answer #2

ill be your friend but who can I trust? to find a new one is a must 1st poem

Answer #3

I HAVE I THING TO SAY AND THAT IS I HHHAAATTTEEE SCHOOL ; (

Answer #4

your the one who but these tears in my eyes just forget you, and let me be

Answer #5

But I will just walk away and find better friends for the next great day.

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