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The Sky Is Exploding On The Horizon

(Intro) (Spoken to screaming) The sky is exploding on the horizon And it is an unbelievable sight.

(Instrumental Breakdown)

(Verse) (Sing) Hold it close, don’t let it go (Scream) Escaping your grasp, it slips away (Sing) That feeling of trust is gone (Scream) And it will never come back

(Chorus) (Sing) Transforming, I will (Scream) Stay clear of you, you’re dangerous (Sing) Writing names, I see (Scream) The pain you’ve wrought, yet the relief (Sing) It’s obvious, removing (Scream) Them from the world 

(Breakdown) (High) You’ve brought upon (Low) Us a new threat. (Squeal) (High) Your vision of (Low) A perfect world (Squeal to high)

(Verse 2) (Sing) Cleansing the world, you say (Scream) That this is right, you’re playing God (Sing) You cannot play God (Scream) You’re not God, no one is.

(Chorus)

(Breakdown) You are notorious The name you’ve given yourself Cleansing the world of sin Yet sinning to achieve it

(Heavier Breakdown) You are Kira Beware Kira Kira (Squeal) Kira (Squeal)

(Chorus)

:::Just so you all know, this song is about kira, the killer of a show by the name “death note” he kills people by writing their name in his deathnote.:::