What do you think of this poem?

Regret is sorrowful It doesnt judge who you are, It judges what you did. You can never lose it Its a new shadow, Lost in society. Winding in and out Finding helpless victims, Its only goal is hate. Although you never lose it It finds unwilling souls, That will never forget their regrets.

whatcha think?

Answer #1

not bad… but u should work on some way to play more with meanings and rime.. but not bad.. u could make a good essay from that, keep up the writing :)

Answer #2

a poetic mind is always beautiful… you have to open you r eyes and ears to you r surroundings then only you can feel the world…go ahead…

Answer #3

i love this one keep up the good work.

Answer #4

awe. thanks!

Answer #5

wow thats deep! ahahahahah its really good u should funmail w/ a bunch of them they r so good!

Answer #6

one word: wow

Answer #7

It’s pretty good. YOu’ll get better as you get older and have more life experiences.

Answer #8

the poem is great I love can you send it as my valentines gift?lol

Answer #9

i totally love it. im a poet myself :D

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