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The temperture’s rising. I know that you knew. Because I can feel Your sense burning through.

Others push us along, But we move at our pace. We will doubt all we want, But you still make my heart race.

You know what your smile Does to my mind. You know all my weaknesses. None left to find.

Come take me away. You know my desire. Yet you leave me alone To burn in your fire.

The way that you light it* ‘Till impossible to tame. It’s waiting for you To finally put out the flame.

When the beginning arrives We will make it last The flames won’t control And turn us to ash.

For now is not always. We can’t burn forever. When the heat’s finished rising We’ll melt in this together.

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Answer #1

this doesnt make any sense if your talking about how to help with this dont change anything about what you wrote its really good =]

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