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A rhyme poem.

I usually dont writ e rhyming poems but heres one. I dont know if its good but well… here it is.

The Truth

Hiding from the truth, isnt so bad. Knowing the truth, can be so sad. But its not all that horrible, when you have friend on your side. To talk to you, so you dont have to hide.

there it is…

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Answer #1

Poetry isnt about good or bad. Its about feeling, emotion, beauty, pain, sorrow, love, and life. There are to many critics in the world, and not enough poets.

Answer #2

I like it. Simple, it isn’t full of extra “cream”… keep up the good work.

It makes sense too!

Answer #3

AyO…just KEEP SMILING… you never know whos watching!! Keep shining you never now how far you will go …:::KEEP IT REAL because everything comes out in the wash, eventually!! “Never give up on poetry, when you got a gift “ It will pay all ya bills one day…:::OneThousand

Answer #4

true

No more Hiding from the truth, my life is not so bad. I love my mom and baby brother plus I love my dad! Knowing the truth, is honest but yet can be so sad. But its not all that horrible, says my BFF called “chad” when you have friends on your side. and the wind is at your back Times are rolling by so quick,you dont know how to act Soneone, anyone, To talk to you, so you dont have to hide. take it from me life moves fast so people drop some pride!!!

there it is…lol

Answer #5

its terrific! I love poems that rhyme. :D its true too!

Answer #6

ahah!!! its amazinly wonderful. ^_^

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