what do you think of this poem?

the freshman girl, oh so shy, sits an watches the sophomore guy. the sophomore guy, with his head in a whirl. sits and watches the junior girl. the junior girl, in her red sedan, sits and watches the senior man. but the senior man, all hot and wild secretly loves the freshman child

Answer #1

Clever…playful…I like it.

Answer #2

thank you

Answer #3

Wow, that’s awesome :)

Answer #4

Well done!!! Very playful…well written…short & sweet….I like it too…

funny how stuff like that always happens…Murphy’s law…we always want what we cant have & always have what we dont want!:P

Answer #5

thank you, and o so true

Answer #6

thx ♥

Answer #7

That’s soooo cute! <3 An 18 year old wanting a 14 or 15 year old is disturbing, though…

Answer #8

ya it is but the sad and in moral truth is it happens

Answer #9

wow!..truly amazing!

Answer #10

Hahaha, indeed it does.

Answer #11

You wrote this..?

Answer #12

haha i love how you pick that out

Answer #13

yes

Answer #14

I couldn’t help myself. My mind is constantly set on creep detection mode.

Answer #15

http://funadvice.com/r/bkeh1phjf

Is this really yours now?

Answer #16

I’ve seen it all over the internet before.

Answer #17

Exactly.

Answer #18

I posted the wrong thing, srry everyone i just posted what i ment to the first time

Answer #19

I’m pretty sure you would have noticed before now if you had posted the wrong thing. Maybe this new one is original, but most people are going to be skeptical now.

Answer #20

i like the way you write…i would post my stuff too but it’s either too long, way to depressing or has to do with love/a broken heart!

Answer #21

ppl can believe what ever they please, but with this it was a mistake to post this and i have the one i ment to post is up now as you know

Answer #22

And you responded to everyone before you were called out to the poem posted above. Anyways, I’m pretty sure you won’t try it again because we’re watching you now ;)

Answer #23

Taking credit for someone elses work could get you in trouble.

Answer #24

lol ok what eve’s, but my poetry is original and legit

Answer #25

im not trying to copyright anyone it was a simple mistake

Answer #26

and just to show to u that it was a simple mistake i shale not delete this nor edit it, that it shale stay up for who ever cares to see

Answer #27

You can’t delete it. And doing so would have made it worse. You can stop blowing up my alerts now. I’m not changing my mind about you.

Answer #28

Oh my goodness, I love this!

Answer #29

omg that SO cute! <3 it!

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