You like my song lyrics?

So I’ve written a couple lyrics. I’m not really serious about poetry or song writing, but these kind of sprung to my mind on the way home. this is basically the chorus, should I try to write the rest or is it just horrendous? haha.

I bet those girls haven’t heard this song bet they don’t know how they’re so wrong gossip gets so mean in the hallway girls are screamin’ separate truth from lies I know it’s hard, sometimes they’re in disguise. forget what she said he made it up off the top ‘her head ohhh and in two weeks it’s not gunna matter

Answer #1

It sounds like it would make a pretty good song, but I wouldn’t classify it as poetry

I think it could work in today’s style of music

Answer #2

u can sing the song in a bubbly scene tune

Answer #3

ROX!

Answer #4

its ok but personaly I like F* the system and liberate better

Answer #5

I like it I think you should work on the rest of it it could be really good

Answer #6

thanks imprettycool0

ichibanarky: yeah you are probably right. poetry is a bit more mature.

Answer #7

I really like it.

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