What should I write after this line?

im trying to write a short, sweet poem for my boyfriend as its our aniversary i have the first line sorted but i dont know how to carry it on and wonderd if anyone had any ideas ive tried completing it but im not sure that it looks good

you are my world, my shinning star without you i’d be a faded star

and im abit stuck to put what next any ideas?

Answer #1

You make me feel shining and bright, and without you I don’t think I would have any light to guide me through life” I don’t know

Answer #2

*shiny

Answer #3

“I’ve searched for so long; I have searched so far. To find a guy as perfect as you are”

Answer #4

i crave ur love and need ur touch. So when u call for me i wont be far.

Answer #5

i love you just the way you are?

Answer #6

ive finished, and this is what ive come up with

you are my world, my shinning star without you id be a faded star because you make me feel so shiny & bright if you’d ever leave the world would sink down and become an upside down mess you give me the power to wake up and have a smile on my face you give me the light in my life and everyday your with me my heart blossoms for you more and more your like an angel or god, you create me with your love and soul lets make this last cause you mean so much to me and put the smile on my face

im so in love with you, and everytime i see your blue eyes sparkle from the light your in it makes my heart beat so fast like the first time i met you and saw you, Sometimes this love feels out of this world because its so unqiue ive never felt this way before and if you ever decide to run and hide ill be the one to say ive found you, if you ever need me ill always be there and if you ever need a favour i will always say yes, because the second one i done for you changed my life in awhole completey amazing way. i love you, i wanna grow old with you, and ill always be yours.

i obvsiably cant put it into a sort poemy formart on here but read it and let me know what you think please

Answer #7

i think it is great and seeing as it cam from the heart he should like it even more

Answer #8

thankyou :)

Answer #9

How’s about this one-line ending; “My future rests in your smile.”

Answer #10

How’s about this one-line ending; “My future rests in your smile.”

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