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Would this be a good song chorus?

I made this up.so if a song was called My boyfriend is a nerd woould this b a good chours 4 a song like that:

He tapes together his glasses He never misses his classes And hes in advanced in math I geuss hes taking the higher path He recived a scholarship to harvard Now I know how love hurts Our relationship is turning into crap How do I fill this gappp?

Do you like it yay or nay or gay why?

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Answer #1

Wow… I agree. I’m someone who has a lot of talent when it comes to music/song writing… and this is NOT meaningful at all. It’s pretty lame =/ Work on it a little more and see if that helps.

Answer #2

gay, im a song writer, its a good topic except the way you put it its not meaningful =/ keep trying tho

Answer #3

its not gay, it just sounds more like a poem. I actually liked it.

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