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Who Can Help Me With A Poem please?

my grandpa is very sick and the doctorz say that he aint doing so good. so we have to start planning my grandpa funeral. that really hurt me and my family so deeply. I just wanted to know if yall know a very but very good poem for my grandpa. or you can make one? someone please help me :(

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Answer #1

I could attempt to write you one if you’d like. I’d need all the information about him, his life, his sickness, ect. To be honest it would mean a lot more for you to write it, but I’ll give it a try for you, if you want.

Answer #2

laying in bed still thinking of you, thoughts still racing and clouding my head, looking back and moving on , living life though your gone, still I wonder how you are, how long its gonna be tell I see you and how far, my hope is still fallen, my heart is bout to fall, your name im sill callen, though I’ve lost it all!

hows that? I wrote it bout my grandmother

Answer #3

For you, who was once very ill With you gone, my world began to unfill Its different without you near To go to, to keep me from my fears Even though you are gone you feel so far away I knew it wasnt going to last forever at some point, you just couldn’t stay But before, now and forever I’ll love you even if we’re not together I’ll cherish every momment With a positive comment I’ll beleive your here Every second I’m not alone Even though this happened Ilove you.

I just created this poem in about 5 mins, I hope you like it, buuut this is your grandfather. Me I never met my grandfather, but I beleive you should use your words from you heart to really explain how you feel. Make it count.

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