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Help! I really need help! Can someone please please please write me a haiku about summer I need help I am having a lot of trouble with this! Pleasee help!
wind, rain and darkness heaviness pervades the earth a sunbeam breaks through
soft blooms of pale pink tumble out from sage green leaves fabric's illusion
sun dappled curtains
hint of a beautiful day
there's housework to do
fresh cut firewood musty smell of earth whiff of coffee
smoke of wood fires through afternoon shadows stitching needlepoint
waking to sunshine
summer like weather today
humid clouds roll in
giant maple leaf bows to the earth sunshine glowing through
drowsing to the sound of wind dancing in trees a truck roars by
I wuvv making haikus :)
Haiku is a poem that has three lines and follows a pattern of 5 -7-5 syllables. The first and last lines have 5 syllables all together, while the middle only has 7.
When I mean syllable, I mean 'beats'. eg. Hello = hel - lo = 2 beats Computer = com - put - er = 3 beats
So for example of a 7 beat line:-
"Hello my name is Ume" = hel- lo my name is u-me = 7
Haikus are extremely easy. They're just like 2-3(maybe +). Just write 3 sentences. Haikus don't need rhyme. Write three sentences to describe summer. And that's it. Haiku.
5 7 5. Five syllables Seven Five again.
The air, relaxing Birds fly above you singing Summer, never end
Haikus: not my strong point :P
5 7 5 here is one :)
Under the sunshine hearing all of the kids play this is relaxing
lol I'm no poet but I like it lol
Summer fun playing loving the sun shining down. lots of laughs and fun 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables
It's definitely 5 7 5 by the way.
