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What has happened?

Oh no What has happened This friendship ruined Gone forever Crying and waiting For you to come back Say you care Cut me some slack I want to see you smile I want to see you happy Please don’t get me wrong I still care What has happened to us You and I We were so close My heart is shattered My soul is lost Please forgive me Tell me your there I’m sorry my friend I really do care.

What do you guys think? This is not about my boyfriend reece it is about a girl at my school. So do you guys and gals (lol) like it? I hope you guys do.

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Answer #1

wow your good! that was really nice emodancer!

Answer #2

I like it it is really great if you dont mind I would like to copy that and put it on my funadvice page

Answer #3

I love it!!! it makes soo much sense and it has great meaning <3 do you like to write poems a lot?? if you do you should join postpoems.com its great to post your work, and you can give and recieve comments from other poets on the site its really great I have an account on it, but I havent used it in a while :( but great job! :D keep up the good work <333

Answer #4

I like it! Very good! Keep writing!!! XD!

Answer #5

Very Nice!

Answer #6

I’m thinking the same way now. so true from the heart; I love it

Answer #7

its really good I like it a lot!!!