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What do you tink of my poam?

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I wrote this poem and I need you to tell me if its good.need all the criticism I can get -would it matter- People say they love But not to me My walls are black My soul is to My heart is crumbling As my mind is melting The night creeps in The blood bleeds throw If I die tomorrow would it matter to you.