Is this poem cheesy?

It is kinda like a poem, but I don’t know. Do you think it is cheesy?? I think it is…but I don’t know:

If the one you love, doesn’t love you back, your still an angel, in someone’s else’s eyes.

Answer #1

It’s nice but change “your” to “you’re”.

Your = possessive (ie. your shirt) You’re = contraction, equals “you are” (ie. you’re still an angel)

Answer #2

yea sweet really …

Answer #3

It’s cliche, and not really saying anything. Cute, though.

Answer #4

I reacon its sweet and really good!!

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