Okay what do you think of this song I wrote? Verse 1 What if the castle was just a house? What if instead of a horse, all you had was a mouse? I would trade my glass slippers for sneakers As long as I don’t have to hear the music comin through the speakers
~Bridge~ All my dreams ever did was fail I’m done living a broken fairytale.
Chorus: All prince charming did was lie And after that I don’t even wanna try Last night I fell asleep crying on the staircase Maybe Neverland isn’t such a happy place I’d gladly fade out of the fairytale, go on to something better I’m sure Snow White would, too if the dwarves would let her
Verse 2 I’d leave without the horse-drawn carriage To get away from a planned marriage I wish that with just one dance, You’d get swept into a perfect romance
~bridge~ x2
Chorus
End: I thought I’d be happy being a Princess, But finding happiness in a perfect life isn’t a big success
wow I love this its so good I mean it and to pakichan whos says appart frm verse 1 he is wrong you should deff write more.
This one is excelent EmilyJean xx
well in verse 1, yeahh it was kinda weird. It was pretty much just saying how someone would trade everything to get away from what the way things were.
thats fantastic! (: I really really like the first verse, but the rest of the song is still as good ! :) x
That's really nice :) Love it.
~AnimalInsanity x
thats accually really good, I think its great
thumbs up apart from verse 1
