What do y'all think of this song I wrote for my best friend?

V1. Rain drops fall from the grey sky the many who cared sobbed and cried it took so long but seemed so fast dads sailing to heaven unfold the mast I guess you don’t know what ya got until it’s gone because every1 needs that special bond

chorus. dad I wish you couldve been here a little longer but as days go by my faith in God still grows stronger and sure enough He took you outta sight but I’m still greatful to Him because He left you in my life

v2. God knows what comes next so I’ll leave the decisions to Him even if it means losing my greatest friend the cross is my coompass which leads to a brilliant life I swear I first saw when you left this place behind

repeat chorus.

Bridge. I hear trumpets sounding in the distance hale to God on High I can’t give up this chance your the only drug I need to get by but I still wish that I could look one more time into his blue eys

repeat chorus.

Outro. Dad I wish one last time I could have said goodbye but I can only hope and pray I’ll meet you at the gates the it’s my turn to die