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What do you think of my poem biggest heart?
I still remember everything, That has happend in the past It kills me,it hurts It won’t leave my mind.
I will never be like her. I will never be good enough, I will never be skinny enough, Or pretty enough.
But I’ll be the one who always cares I will be the one whos always there to take your hand. I will be the one that will never leave your side Even at your worse times
I’ll always be the one that cares . More and more Than anyone else ever could I will always be the one with the biggest heart.
I think it was good but you should try to change some of the words. you need to write with a little more emotion. you should express yourself a little bit more. but you have a pretty good idea of what you are doing. when you write another one just remember to express yourself a little more. I like it though it was good.
I like it reminds me of what im going threw with this guy that likes me I kinda feel that way but hes scared bout are age difference
in the second stanza, you use the word enough too much, but its good. I totally get what its about
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