What do you think

Its called flag of pain

I have expierience on my side As I prepare for battle I wave my flag of pain

Pain makes you stronger Makes you better Makes you wiser

I went through much suffering My hatred grew stronger I became an avenger

I made myself perfect Drivin by hate Drivin by pain

I turn and face my opponent He is big He is strong

He shows no mercy His brutality is great I have never expierienced so much pain

I taste blood My ears ring And the ground becomes red

How could this be I was perfect And now I am helpless

I was uterlly defeated My bones crushed My heart broken

Expierience wasnt enough Hate wasnt enough And now I yet again Wave my flag of pain

Please give me an honest opinion and really sorry about spelling I was in a hurry

Answer #1

Spend alittle more time organizing your lines..other then that its fantastic!

Answer #2

Real gud!!! :)

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