What can I do with my story?

I loved the ideas you gave me and will probably use one. But now I have another part. So the girl and guy kiss and then one of her friends comes in and wants to talk to her. I really don’t know what they could talk about!!(if you don’t know, she ran away and a group of people found her and at one point she was about to do drugs then a guy stopped her and they kissed and now I’m here)So, can you help me? Please don’t move this to the admin stuff because this is a legit question and I need it answered

Answer #1

The friend could try to get her to do the drug again? He could ask her if she needs a place to stay, as she has run away from home.

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