Random thing that came to my head, tell me what you think

I close my eyes and think about the precious sight of you And although I wish it were unreal Those moments are all too few Your arms are wrapped around me holding me so tight I feel like I’m lost in peace Nothing has ever felt so right Your eyes sparkle As they look into mine I see happiness there A joy that’s so divine You kiss my lips gently My heart begins to melt I’m in a world I’ve never known before With a feeling I’ve never felt Your hands are reassuring I feel like my heart will never break I have a feeling of trust in you There is no room for mistake Then slowly you pull away And my heart begins to fear I open my eyes and once again you’ve dissapeared The room is cold again I lie here alone and discrete But I know someday you’ll be back in my life And I will again be complete Until then I’ll close my eyes where Things aren’t as they seem And pray that one day this will be more than just a dream

Answer #1

thats really good… I like it a lot. keep writing.

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