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Leslie the penguin

Written by: kaylee helmandollar

Illustrated by: kaylee helmandollar

Hey my name is leslie. I live in the artic. My feathers keep me warm. I eat fish, to get my fish I dive into water. My best friend hayden is a excellent diver. She is the best diver I know.

I don't know what I would do without my feathers. My feathers thick coat keeps me warm and alive in the cold. I am never cold in the artic. I have the thickest coat out of all my friends. All of my friends are jealous of how thick it is.

Diving into the water is so much fun! I love the water. My friends and I pay in the water as much as possible. Playing shark in the water is my favorite game.

I am good at diving I plunge into the water head first with my flippers towards the water. I love to jump in the water. My friends and I jump to see who can jump the farthest. I can jump pretty far.

Well I am ready to go home to my family. I am finished telling you about my feathers, diving skills, and everything me and my friends like to do in the water. Hopefully you enjoyed hearing about myself and how I live.