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ok I'm 13 and I write poems all the time. I am so depressed though because my parents split up and then they always fight on the phone. heres on of them tell me what you think.
I'm just a girl that is totoally confussed. my eyes are sad even though I'm not blue. I look around and try to think why I am looking so bleak. then I turn around to see that you have come to follow me. the tears well up in my uneven eyes and then I stare at you and begin to cry. you just stand there and shadow me, when I look up your laughing at me. I ask you why you would laugh at me and then I find this heart breaking. I feel so shattered and then I see, you rfriends have come to see whats wrong and then they laugh when I tell them to move along. I look for you and your there for me and then I hoping half-heartedly that you will come back one day and take this chance and give love for me. I find you there once again cradleing me. you pull my face up to yours and then you say that I'm all yours. you lean down and then kiss me. my heart fliters aimlessly, you look down and then you see you do it again and I'm good in. I feel the tears run down my face for that love that we share will never break. that day that you and I kiss is so wonderufl I'll never forget.
what do you think. be honest. I know it may be depressing but just try to remeber that I write about depressing stuff. sorry. just tell me what you think PLEASE.
I agree with zero. Not that uncommon, so don't get in such a tizzy over it. These things happen, the best thing you can do is live on and rise above your sadness. If you can't, you'll just live your whole life with it controlling you. And that kind of life, in my opinion, is no life at all. It's empty and meaningless repetition. After all, it's human nature to grow and persevere.
hey you other guys you should be bit nicer its not just my parents divorce its also boyfriend, and friends so... I know that these aren't very uncommon problems but still. I also have like only 3-4 friends so cut me some slack and try to understand where I'm coming from ok!!! you guys probably don't understand ok.
gosh. you should be writing poems, tanuki. That's pretty deep, kinda like my poems. If you want to read one of mine, then go ahead and look on my recent questions and it will say "Help me!!!" That will be the one that has my poem.
Btw...Randi, that sounds really good!!!
Luv, Cheerful0292
I was only saying to learn from and grow from your experiences. Live, learn, persevere to the future you want to have.
~53% divorce rate. It's not uncommon. See a therapist, it helps.
