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Please Help..I need this job!!

okay basically this is what I would like to say in the most proffesional way possible, because I am interviewing for a top notch company in boston and part of the interview is a role play: To emma jones…u are missing information on your application and in order for it to be complete and to go thru accurately you would have to fill out all the required info and resend me the application…

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Answer #1

your awesome!!! thanks so much!!

Answer #2

this is what they want me to rewrite and word perferctly as if I was sending it to a customer…

Writing Sample

Please use this opportunity to communicate to a customer that s/he needs to contact you, so that you can ascertain missing personal information needed to complete her/his student loan application.

Answer #3

Dear Ms Jones

In order for us to complete your student loan application we require the following personal information from you:

(then list the information)

Could you please contact me as soon as possible with all the required information.

Yours Sincerely Your name Tel/sel: email:

I take it this is what you need from the question they gave you. Let me know if you need anymore help :)

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