New lyrics/song I wrote, what do you think??

Intro Look around What cant you say? Simply me in the background scene They say shy girls are quite Never to be seen The time has come for my dreams to be heard Wonderful youll see Wonderful Ill be

Verse 1 Passion was robbed from me And now I am taking it back Heres my new direction Express my affections Revel in perfection I wont hide from asking Bout whom I could be

Chorus 1 Caution, and unexpected threat More frighting than a thriller Less tender than a thief More violent than a killer I can take your breath away If you let me just Breathe, breathe.

Verse 2 Escaping the new Leaving the old Talents broke out Discover my melody Theres someone here inside me Someone who had died so long ago No more hiding who I am No Im ready to kill. Chorus 2 Caution, And unexpected threat More frightening than a thriller Less tender than a thief More violent than a killer I can take your breathe away If you let me just Breathe, breathe. Middle 8 I am alone at middle crisis Im beautiful in my own mind I just realized that my world and yours Cant collide You have your dreams and I have mine No one turn the light on Let me glow in the dark Get ready, get set, here I go.

Chorus 3 Caution An unexpected threat More frightening than a thriller Less tender than a thief More violent that a killer I will take your breath away I am going to just Breathe, breathe, breathe.

Answer #1

deep :) I like it

Answer #2

this is amazing.

You have major talent. Lucky. lol..

(:

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