My poem?

This is my poem.. What do you think? Honestly. I’m in enough pain so it doesn’t matter if I get bad comments.

my feelings were real, not fake, I tried so hard to give you my all, but now your gone, I’ve been replaced, I know no ones perfect, but to me, you are, I stayed with you, through thick and thin, was dating you ever a sin? How come through everything you said and did, I still didn’t win? time goes by, from future to past, I thought we would actually last, now my hearts broken, and I think I need a cast, theres a hole in my heart, and it’s deep, just like my love for you, it can’t go away, even when I try, all I ever do is fall, because without you I can’t breathe, as I gaspe for air, I think this through, what did I ever do to you? why isn’t this fiar? as I sit here, a pen in my hand, and my heart and feelings speaking out, I ask you what does she have that I don’t? you said you loved me, and now you don’t know, but right now without you, I cannot go on, as these tears slip down my face, I look up on a star, and wonder where you are, where is that boy that made me smile? even for just a while? as I search and see him with another girl, inside the pain just starts to burn, my eyes, watery like the ocean, the pain, like I’ve been stabbed, and as I fall down, hard on the ground, I wonder if you will ever be there, to catch me or watch me fall..

So what do you think?