My poem.

I can’t go on anymore, go on with all this bullsh*t Everything is burning in flames around me Getting ruined, falling to the ground in ashes No time to rewind Do it all right again This time I know for sure each thing is my mistake My promise broken This time a night out won’t brighten up my day A spliff and a bottle of wine might work for the moment But how soon until it all comes back? The only thing I know is that I can’t sleep at night I can’t think or pretend to be okay anymore! You were the one I could confine(?) in, My best friend Now you have your back turned on me Was it what I did? I’m such a stupid girl, Each time you said I was perfect the way I am made me boil up inside You try to comfort me but it doesn’t work I’m screaming now I need a way out Everything is happening way too fast, Way too soon and I’m just not ready.

Please just go away Please just don’t talk to me. Please I don’t want to pretend anymore Please just leave me, walk away Please come back to me, with open arms when I’m in a better place Please tell me about those better days Its all just too much, ready to give in. Enslaved to a world that never gave a sh*t anyway.

comment? please don’t be nasty, I just want to know if the structures good etc, or how it could be improved. thankkies. x