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Do you think that this is a good poem?:
At the peak of blackness in the night You see me for who I truly am
In the burning light of day You kiss me because of who I am
In the time when the sun sets low You call me to tell me how much you love me
At the breaking of the day You told me something that confused me
In the mid-morning sun I had figured it out And you said good-bye one last time.
I like it. especially the end half
That is an amense poem cool beans
I like it...pretty deap.
cool.
~Kaff~
