my maybe cool poem

when you feel

when the sun rises you yawn, when the moon brightens you feel beautiful, when your in a house all alone thats not your you feel scared. the only thing you do is laugh when around friends, and yet we don’t care about little things.but still we hear. and when you here fighting the only thing you want to do is make it stop and leave. when you feel brezze you feel refreshed. like at the end of a long day.

Answer #1

thats cute but on the third sentence I dont get or misspelled” not your you” I think you typed it twice =]

Answer #2

She ment “that’s not yours you feel scared”

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