Latest poem; sad or not?

My life is nothing but sadness and disappointment. therefore, I got all my thoughts and feelings about it right here.

                                 Sad life of a broken soul

People say I’m pretty You know I’m not You pushed me aside for the supermodel Will she love yo uunconditionally; I doubt it.

People say I shouldn’t give up on love Well what should I do I always get my fragile heart broken Now it’s in pieces; no one can mend it.

‘cause I’m a broken soul I wander the world; unseen because of it’s shallowness Does anyone have a clue how it feels Didn’t think so

Therefore, I’ll go, faraway where no one knows me It won’t matter; life will be the same everywhere Cold, shallow, empty of love What has this world come to; I don’t know.

Answer #1

oh I love it but I hope that you will talk to me abut it I can so totally relate to this and I bet other people can too. LOVE YOU TONS. LOVE ALWAYS EMODANCER.

Answer #2

although it’s very sad, it also has meaning and a purpose. I think it’s beautiful

Answer #3

I like it allot

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