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Just a Poem

I know other people have worse problems than me and what I have now isn’t even a problem. I’m just so inspired now I thought I’d write you guys a poem:

light and dark two opposites together like raven and dove two birds of a feather

colors of a fruit peachy and green tastes like sweet summer and clean

clear sight sky look up and direct see clouds close feel calm and collect

this is earth don’t let it waste away we know and love please let it stay

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Answer #1

its really good I wrote a poem once it was when I was in 2nd grade. read a book, see a cook.

my brothers a dork, eat with a fork,

live life, at its fullest.

ride in a car, but only go so far…

lol that was so long ago

Answer #2

your poem was pretty cambei, it made me smile :)

Answer #3

I love it!

Answer #4

yeah thats awesommme!!! really perfect expressin and creative. loll

Answer #5

wow you have a lot of talent it was really good especialy the first part

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