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Is this poem weird or good?
cancer girl
she is just a girl
with a disease
that killed her worldit gained her sad fame
it was a sick game
the doctors played well
and they only got shame
friends screamed
family cried
a rose was broughtto her grave
on the day she diedcancer girl
where are you now?
when they said they would help,
the world took a vowno more disease suffocates your soul when you left there was an empty hole life and family left without shy and cry say your good bye the priest raised his old hands shaking towards the sky cancer girl gone awhile shine some light from a sun no brighter than your smile remember the vivid happiness blink the pain away scream and cry anguish for the girl you lost today
It is very nice. I love the varying but similar rhyming schemes.
Good job. :)
I like it ;D
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