Is This Flow Good For a 13 Year Old

Cool Homeboy,now listen to more rap study on how they Do they Flows and all that sh*t!

blerg shutup. Thats amazing, I have a lot of friends that are pretty good rappers, they have already released CD’s in stores and junk but they didn’t get good until they were in their later teens. For a 13 year old thats amazing, way to go!

There is no flow, only rhyme. The kids trying to hard to make it rhyme without taking into consideration the flow of it. There doesn’t seem to be a goal of this little poem.
Give the kid a English literature book and teach them how to write poems before jumping into rap. Poems give meaning, flow and understanding whilst rap will make it sound good when sung.

However, When said it sounds like something a 13 y/o would say and think of though, so it’s average.

its crap

WOW! that’s all I have to say.

this flow sucks, you arent a gangster whos going around stabbling and killing people