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Is this a good storyline?

I’m writing a book. It’s going to be about a boy that finds a dying dragon. The dragon tells him that she has a nest. She also tells him some quick tips on raising a dragon, and the location of the nest. She then asks him to raise her three dragons. The dragon hatchlings, named Seraphina and Felix are raised by the boy, Briar, in a mountain range. They are taken after 5 months to find more dragons. They don’t even know if any other dragons exist. They finally come across a lush valley. There lives a community of dragons. They spend some time there before deciding that it’s where they want to spend their lives.

Now tell me: Do you think it is good? how can I improve on it? any advice? should there be a sequel?

Thnx ;)

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Answer #1

iamcool- I don’t know the whole plot of eragon, I’m reading it now, though. If it’s too much like eragon, I’ll change it.

Answer #2

it sounds pretty good. ima writer myself. you shouldnt b thinking about sequels yet, unlwess you keep them living on or something and want to show waht happens next. it is a good storyline, but personally, I hate books about dragons. fantasys stupid to me.

Answer #3

Just keep following the plot of Eragon. It’s gpt you this far…

Answer #4

Any OTHER opinions? :)

Answer #5

It’s going to be about dragons, no matter what.

Answer #6

maybe get rid of the dragons and it might do

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